Nice capture of action Dave. The low angle and lighting are very nice. The bird's head is a bit soft and may respond to more sharpening. Also you could lose a bit of water below and add some above to provide a bit better balance to the image. I am very envious of people who have loon/diver opportunities.
Last edited by John Chardine; 01-24-2009 at 05:09 PM.
Reason: typo
Hey Dave,
I like John's idea of taking a bit off the bottom....about 1/2....would further emphasize the action. Definitely agree on a bit more selective sharpening on the head but as John mentioned.....the action is super ....so the minor tweaks will just strengthen an already strong image.
I agree with all above and would add that simily selecting and darkening the pupil would increase the apparent sharpness.
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