Overall very nice. I like the deatils on the lowered wing. I would plce the bird further to the left of the frame...It would give the impression of giving it more room to "fly" into. Love the BG and the hint of water at right.
If you could have gotten the right wing lit the same as the left wing, it would be just out of this world. Still the image is very strong and has tons of appeal, common bird or not (ain't common in Australia!). I love it! :)