Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: Jump

  1. #1
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Palm Bay ,Florida
    Posts
    347
    Threads
    178
    Thank You Posts

    Default Jump

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    White Pelican jumping off dock to chase bait fish. Sebastian, Fl
    Canon 5D Mark II, 500 F4L IS, 1.4 TC, @F5.6, 1/6400sec, Manual Mode

  2. #2
    Ákos Lumnitzer
    Guest

    Default

    I think the wings look great and the position is very nice overall. I would like to see a little more space though. :)

  3. #3
    Super Moderator Daniel Cadieux's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Ottawa, Canada
    Posts
    26,273
    Threads
    3,977
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I agrre with Akos, more room top, bottom, and right would give this image some breathing space...just feels cramped as is. Exposure is handled well, but would like a little less agressive sharpening...a few sharpening halos below bill and around primaries are evidence of this.

  4. #4
    Robert Amoruso
    Guest

    Default

    Hey Layton,

    Saw this one on your website and liked it. I would agree with more room as suggested. With this sky, an easy thing to do.

  5. #5
    Maxis Gamez
    Guest

    Default

    Hi Layton,

    Interesting pose. I wish for more room all around.

  6. #6
    Lifetime Member Doug Brown's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Albuquerque, NM
    Posts
    11,879
    Threads
    917
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nice job with exposure and sharpness. Agree about more room. I would lighten the iris a little to give the eye some more life.
    Upcoming Workshops: Bosque del Apache 2019, Ecuador 2020 (details coming soon)
    Website -
    Facebook - 500px

  7. #7
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Córdoba, Spain
    Posts
    3,099
    Threads
    211
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Another vote for more room around the bird and I also suggest a selective increase of the saturation in the yellow/orange areas of the skin and a litle more to the BG. Yellows and blues compliments extremely well each other :-)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics