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    I'd like your opinions on this photo of a yellow-rumped warbler I took.

    Olympus SP-550 UZ
    f4.7 @ 1/30, ISO 100, -0.3 EV
    Spot metering
    Auto white balance
    Processed in Photoshop CS2; cropped, shadow/highlight, curves adjustment, saturation increase, some dodging on the eye, and sharpened

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    Lance Peters
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    Hi Chris - bird looks sharp and colours are good, nice catchlight in the eye.
    Ha might be a little off, I find the dark branch that covers the tree trunk on the top RHS a little distracting - would probably QM it out. Also maybe some NR on the background.
    Looking forward to seeing more :)

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    Hi Christopher,
    I like the capture...you have good sharp details and good color rendition...the background is quite busy, you have a few branches intersecting the bird...I cloned out these and cleaned up the background by running noise reduction...see if this presents best to you...:cool:

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    I knew Gus was going to go to work. Bird could just use a little more sharpening. Maybe high pass filter. Good HA and pose. Nice shot Christopher.

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    Thank you all for your suggestions. I ran some noise reduction on the background, cloned out the dark branch on the tree trunk, cloned out most of the background branches, and sharpened a little more. How does this look?

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    Agree the bg is cluttered and would like seeing it clean but would only remove a branch coming out of head or prominent part. I think starting to remove all the little twigs will be a mayor undertaking to have it look natural, more than I care to spend.

    My focus on these images would improving at the time of capture. These little guys are difficult at best !!!

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