
Originally Posted by
Jim Fenton
Ray...
I do print and sell a fair bit of raptor stuff and I find the what attracts buyers on a static shot is head / body position and eye contact.
I like the snow falling, the ruffled head feathers, but I don't find the head position and eye contact to be solid enough based on my experience? To me, the head is a bit too tucked, there is interferences with the beak and shoulder feathers and not enough real definition /contact with the eye.
The background is a bit busy as well and without taking out the nicety of the snow falling, there isn't a whole lot you could do with it to blur it at all...I don't think?
Overall, I've told myself that in order for most of my images of this type to be successful, they must show the soul of the creature....otherwise they are just another image which anyone with a digital camera looks at and says..."I could have taken that"!
Not trying to be overly critical...just stating my observations / thoughts.