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    Jonathan Michael Ashton
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    Taken on a very dull day
    Canon 20D Canon 500mm f4 L IS plus 1.4TC
    ISO 800 + 0.67
    1/320 sec @ f5.6

    All comments welcome

    Jon

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    Overall very nice. Head turn is just right, and I like the walking pose. Too much space above though, I would crop some off there. The sand clumps aren't the best looking ones either, I would have rathered plain smooth sand all the way...but this is what you were presented with.

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    Very nice pose, angle and details. I might raise the color temperature and crop a bit off top and right.

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    Lovely pose and soft light. I agree re cropping from top and right and may play with patching out the sand lumps.
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    I think this is very nice. Sharp, great light and post-action. Was the beach sloping down and to the left or does the image need some CW rotation?

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    Jonathan Michael Ashton
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    The beach was sloping ...... but I am not the best at getting horizontals horizontal!! Thanks for the C&C everyone - much appreciated

    Jon

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