Like the wing position and the sharpness. The light area in the BKGR behind the bird and just above its feet is a bit distracting but not much to be done about that. Working large, paintind a Quick Mask of the pupil, and darkening it would increase the appartent sharpness. And maybe de-SAT the iris.
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You could crop a bit above to eliminate the thin brown band at top, and would also apply some noise reduction to the BG. As noted, nice wing position and sharpness.