Is it too much in the center of the image and have few contrast ?
Is it too much in the center of the image and have few contrast ?
Last edited by Giovanni Frescura; 12-26-2008 at 06:06 AM.
This is quite lovely; love the BKGR and the underwing detail. With birds coming at you, the center of the frame is fine. I think that you could go lighter. Another trick is to make a QM of the stuff in the l-l-c and try a 15 pixel Gaussian blur on it to soften it up....
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In addition to Artie's suggestions, I would selectively lighten the eyes. Nice photo!
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Great pose, details and BG. I agree regarding it being somewhat dark, especially the eye. I might give it a bit more space if you have.
I like the shot as is. It's definetly not a buzzard. It looks like it's a red-tailed hawk.
Nicely done! Agree that the image could do with some brightening up.
What species? When and where, and how (tech details of exposure).
Beautiful image Giova, just a little work with the previous suggestions and the image would really shine!
Would love to see this one optimized.
Robert
Hi
Arthur I am very honored for your words and thanks a lot!!
I ask your patience because I not speak english well :
what you mean when you wrote:
to make a QM of the stuff in the l-l-c and try a 15 pixel Gaussian blur on it to soften it up....
What is QM ? I-I-c ?
Thanks for your kindly ...and Happy New Yeak !!
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Giovanni
Lovely Jackal Buzzard, Giovanni - typical Giants Castle. Love the wing position and flared tail. QM l-l-c is shorthand for making a Quickmask selection of the lower left corner - when you exit Quickmask mode this selects everything except what you have painted over with the rubylith overlay so you need to invert the selection to select the l-l-c and then apply the 15 pixel Gaussian Blur. Agree that the image can use some lightening so have tried a version with the suggestions
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