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    Another from Viera Dawn.
    Canon Eos1D MarkIII, 500mmF4L @ F4, Iso 400, 1/8000sec, Manual

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    Another image with a lot of potential but too tight in the frame Layton. Love the gradient in the BG.

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    I kinda like the tight frame (forgive me Maxis!).

    Id there were more negative space, the palm stump or whatever it is would seem to insignificant to me.

    I might have made the bird a bit darker in silhouette perhaps?

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    I agree with Maxis about the tightness in the frame, and agree with Jim in making the silhouette darker on the bird. I would also smooth out the vertical dark band in LRC to match the LLC. Great potential here.

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    The colors and pose are great and I agree with Daniel's suggestions.

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