Another from Viera Dawn. Canon Eos1D MarkIII, 500mmF4L @ F4, Iso 400, 1/8000sec, Manual
Another image with a lot of potential but too tight in the frame Layton. Love the gradient in the BG.
I kinda like the tight frame (forgive me Maxis!). Id there were more negative space, the palm stump or whatever it is would seem to insignificant to me. I might have made the bird a bit darker in silhouette perhaps?
I agree with Maxis about the tightness in the frame, and agree with Jim in making the silhouette darker on the bird. I would also smooth out the vertical dark band in LRC to match the LLC. Great potential here.
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The colors and pose are great and I agree with Daniel's suggestions.
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