The re-post is better but has a bit too much on the top for me. Maxis's advice to move to your left to better parallel the head is a good o ne. It looks as if it is the actual eyelid not the nictitating membrane. And option would be to Qm the front half of the eye and flop it... If that fits with ones personal ethics. At the least lightening the iris would help.
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Well done. Both the eye and the crop are improvements.
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