eric, for my tastes there is too much blank space all around. a crop into the subject may work better. love the thought. maybe would have been better with more lens.
Eric,
I can appreciate what you were trying to do, but I'm afraid that this one does not cut the mustard for me...The first impression that I get is that this is the way the world looks from the eyes of person with glaucoma and tunnel vision; all narrow and distorted. Go back to the original capture and see if it would be best to present it as a narrow crop from whatever angle you choose. Repost and lets see how it looks then...:cool:
I like it !!! The large in frame makes al the difference for me Might try for smoother transition to the dark and could go with a non conforming frame also !!!! Neat !!!