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    Here's another view of the mystery succulent from Balboa Park. I was going for the rim light effect on the leaves, and liked getting some of the texture within the leaves as well.

    Nikon D80, Nikkor 105mm f/2.8, ISO 100, f/36, 1/8s, backlit. GS conversion and slight warm tone in LR2.

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    I think you made your oint on the rim light, especially on the two front leaves. Good texture on the two front ones as well.

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    Very good composition Bruce,
    I like the texture and contrast...your desired effect comes across loud and clear...good show...:cool:

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    love the lines and curves and the detail in the image. Might consider a version with traditional silver/gelatin effect ....

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    Bruce, you have a very nice composition and you don't need any advice from me- but I will say that the slight bend of the leaves at the bottom of the photo makes it perfect for me!

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    Just perfect for me Bruce I like the repeating patterns and lighting Appealing and beautiufl !!

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    Me, too. The lighting is to die for. It totally draws my eye in and around the plant. I bet this would look good as a traditional silver gelatin as well.

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    For comparison, here is the same image without the warm toning

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    Bruce, I like them both but the second one has more appeal to me personally. To my eye there is a bit more contrast but that could be due to the greyish nature of the image. Good job!!

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