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    This is another Ibis image from a few weeks back.

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    Lance Peters
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    Hi Adams - another fine image in my books .. HA is good, BG is gorgeous.
    Only thing I might do is to get rid of the lighter patch on the RHS about 1/2 way up.

    Well done !!

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    Hi Adams, I much prefer your Ibis #1 to this version and I'm trying to analyze why that is. I like the pose better and the inclusion of a portion of the reflection enhances the image whereas to me, #2 looks like there is no virtual room for the feet. #1 is sharper with more direct eye contact. That said, I would take either in a heartbeat if they were mine. great captures with beautiful bg, detail and composition.

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    Hi Adams,
    I like your composition and capture. You have sharp details and good color rendition. I like the background and the water greenish hues. you do have good eye contact and a good head angle. My only suggestion would be to lighten the background just a tad...good show...:cool:

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    Adams, This is great! love the BG colors and the pose-HA is good, well done

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    Hi Adam, Very nice image; I like it. I love the background. I think Gus suggestion on lightening it bit would make it even stronger. Good colors and details in the bird. Over all good compostiton. I also might try and add a bit on the bottom for the virtual feet.

    Congrtulations and thanks for sharing!

    Phil

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    I love this image Adams Wouldn't change much at all, maybe just the bg as suggested by Gus

    Regarding he feet is interesting If you give more room at the bottom it will look odd, find it to be true with lots of leg reflections !!! Doing well !!!

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    Nonda Surratt
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    I think the BG is lovely! Love the light and eye. I rather agree with Katie about the feet but looking at it see where Alfred is coming from too

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