Mike,
This is the same image and composition that you posted yesterday titled "Stand Up Kind Of Girl" The techs are identical for the exception of the shutter speed which varied from 100sec. to 125sec. My same comments apply to this one as the previous. more room on top for the head, crop slightly from the bottom and from the left. need to open up the blacks around the eye area and selective sharpen the eye, with a boost in saturation and contrast. you need to increase the shutter speed; its way too low or use fill flash...:cool:
I like the pose also Mike and a little head turn on her part would have made a difference !!!
Mike is you do use a flash it will be fill flash so the image looks natural. It won't freeze the bird but does give it a sharper look and nice catch light !!!