Well done Lady Denise,
I like the up close pose. I would selective sharpen the eye just a tad...good show. The yellows are in check with good sharp details; and the color rendition is good...:cool:
What everyone else has said seems on the mark to me. That right area on the breast looks a little "hot" because of the lighting. You might try to desaturate it just a touch or use a reverse "s" curve to bring it down a bit and then use a mask to put everything else back where it was originally.
Lovely expression and pose you captured. Alfred is right - the spacing on the left to keep the bird off center was well done and nicely seen.