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    Art Kornienko
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    Default The working bee

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    20D, EFS 602.8, ISO400, 1/320 F4, taken early morning. Critiques very welcome.
    Last edited by Art Kornienko; 12-03-2008 at 09:44 PM. Reason: Wrong picture was attached

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    Julie Kenward
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    Art, I very much like your composition. You got in nice and close and put the whole thing on a delightful angle. I do think you landed your focus more on the flower than on the bee's face. Next time, zero in on those eyes and snap off several at once. There's bound to be one where the focus will land right where you want it.

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    Mike Moats
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    Hey Art, love the comp, and agree with Jules, the eyes needs to be sharper. Like the DOF.

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