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    Default Titmouse

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    Canon 40D
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    1/250 sec. at f/ 5.0

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    nice denise! almost too big in the frame for me. looking at the techs i might raise the ISO to get some more shutter speed. i think it would be a little sharper if the shutter speed was faster. you sure nailed the HA!!!!

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    Lady Denise,
    I like the close up pose. the head angle and eye contact are dead on. Agree with Doctor Davis on the shutter speed. You do have good color rendition, and the pale soft background compliments your subject well. My suggestion is to touch up the eye and surrounding area with a dab of selective sharpening...just a tad about two passes of 2% intensity. Also, crop from the bottom about half of the brown floor...good show...I like it...:cool:

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    I like it as presented. You can never please H. If it's too small in the frame or now it's too big. :confused::confused:
    What gives H. :eek:
    Very sharp and great head angle.
    Regards

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    Hi Denise

    It looks pretty sharp to me (maybe a tad more USM around the eye wouldn't go amiss but just a tad) and I am fine with the size of the bird in the frame.

    I'd maybe tone down the brightness a touch and boost the saturation slghtly. But, it's a really nice shot anyway.

    Cheers.

    Sean

    Edit: Here's what I mean.

    Edit again: The head angle is perfect!
    Last edited by SeanKP; 12-01-2008 at 06:50 PM.

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    yep, OZ, you are right!! never satisfied. just an opinion amigo!

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    Thanks everyone for your opinion- I'm not an overly sharp person-I tend to like things more natural-I have to get use to sharpening more-Thanks for your input,much appreciated!

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    denise, do you sharpen for web? i do just a very slight sharpening of my jpegs just before posting. this is above and beyond what i did to the RAW. when i say slight i mean like ~15-0-0

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    Nice image, Denise. I like it as presented...

    Cheers,

    Bruce

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    Like the repost bringing out the buff colours. Like the foot on the peanut!!! Just a little sharpening of the eye? Nicely done Denise!

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    Quote Originally Posted by harold davis View Post
    denise, do you sharpen for web? i do just a very slight sharpening of my jpegs just before posting. this is above and beyond what i did to the RAW. when i say slight i mean like ~15-0-0
    No- I don't but maybe I should. Thanks I'll try that on my next post

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    Hi denise:

    Lovely shot, I love the Tit Mouse's ~ Took me 6 months to get a Bridled without havig to enhance it. Never sit still away from a feeder for more than a second.

    Well done

    Un`cle Gus

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    Hi Denise - Looks good to me. Only needs a tad of sharpening :)

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    Great comments !!!

    It is a good image Denise. Would like more room since it is tight Sharpness wise the narrow dof is playing tricks here, I think we some how expect a little more but that is all we get. Focusing on the eye is all we can do !!!

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    Denise - This looks like a terrific image to me: bird's position, sharpness, great bg.
    Gail

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    This picture makes me smile, I think you have a great eye Denise. Apart from the technical aspects, which I don't have the experience to comment on, I find your bird photos consistently delightful. Thanks for sharing.

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    Thankyou everyone for your thoughts

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