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    I had a great 1 week trip to one of the best birding location in India - Keoladeo Ghana National Park, Bharatpur, Rajasthan. Made this Sarus Crane image preening. Spent around 2 hrs with this beauty.

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    Canon 800mm on 1D Mark III. ISO 200, 1/800 @ f8, Manual Exposure using Sekonic L308S lightmeter.

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    Like the preening pose, the soft light, and the BG. Sharpness is excellent. I'd like to see a bit more eye contact. Also, I'd like to see the bird placed slightly more to the right in the frame. Thanks for posting!
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    Lovely mood in this image, Sudhir. I like the colours and the OOF foreground and BG complement each other well. I agree with Doug that the image would benefit from having the bird more to the right in the frame. I would prefer a little less contrast around the face so that the shadow details were more visible. Look forward to more images from your trip.
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    Beautiful bird, good details and preening pose. Adding to the other comments, putting the bird further to the left would also prevent that you clip the 'virtual back'.

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    Lovely preening pose, and I love the out of focus foreground. Another vote for cropping some of the right, too much negative space there, and I may desaturate the red channel in Hue/Saturation to leet more detail show through.
    I think the gray frame does not go with the warm colors of the image.

    looking forward to more.

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    I like thi image a lot but I would change, if this is possible, the composition. i do not like the croped body at the left so I think that more room at the left would improve the composition. I like a lot the OOF reddish stuff in the foregroung and the bird pose. I have to agree with Fabs about the red channel, a little bit oversaturated to my taste. the red channel is easily oversaturated by digital bodies. Keep them coming

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    Thanks a lot for the comments. I do agree with the composition. I have other preening images where the back does not touch the frame. Probably that's a better candidate than this. Thanks again.

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    Sudhir

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