Murray
I like the portrait and composition of this one. I think that there is too much contrast and sharpening. Also, did you clone something out along the right side....some of the side "feathers" are blurred and there appears to be a dark line/halo, especially on the top.
The sharpening worked well for print but you're right, I should have done it differently for the web. Also I confess to carelessness in not detecting the black rim. The next one will be better!