The photo really tells a story! As presented the birds are a little small in the frame and also too centered for my taste. Here's a repost in which I played around with Shadows & Highlights, did some additional sharpening, and recropped. How do you like it?
I like the interaction and the lightened chest in the repost improves the image, although there is a S/H halo now. Softer light would have helped in this situation.