Well this one looks just fine! Beautiful BG and nice tones throughout the image. You might selectively darken the branch just a bit and try giving the eye just a tweak of lightening. That ought to further bring out the great stare you're getting from him.
Thanks guys.
Sean, I had been using a 430EX but had taken it off. Then I tried the camera's built in flash with different exp settings - the max ss I could get according to the manual was 1/250sec: if I set the mode to AV the camera would select the ss automatically between 30sec and 1\250sec so I had no control there.
Don't worry though, I've still got to figure out a lot of things and experiment!!;)
Jeni, this is superb...I like it very much...the bird is placed just right in frame. You have sharp details and goos color rendition I like the head angle and eye contact. The perch in my opinion adds the extra color punch to the image...well done...:):cool: