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    I created this image in late August on a misty day. I like how the water was beading on the bird's feathers. I was on a board walk so, unfortunately, I could not get a lower angle but I do like the eye contact.

    I've noticed that a portion of the right wing edge has "disappeared" perhaps because of too much contrast. I may go back and re-work the image. Should I perhaps crop it a bit tighter as well?

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    Last edited by Stephen Stephen; 11-24-2008 at 12:51 PM.

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    I like the water droplets on the feather, and also the eye contact. I'd like to see a little more canvas on the right, and maybe a little less on the left. The image has a yellowish cast. Here's a repost where I adjusted the white and black points, as well as the gamma.
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    Agreed the first has a tad of a yellowish cast, but that's almost not a bad thing in my book. When I look at the 2nd one, the white high-key background is so purely white that it almost gives it a blown-out look.

    Neat pose, and the water droplets are great.

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    I like the mood and droplets. It is just a bit too centered for my taste.

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    Thank you Doug, Terry and Axel

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