I would like to see a little more eye contact. Moving few feet to your left would give you more of a "profile" look. The whites are a little hot as well. I wonder what this image would look like in horizontal?
Jim
You definitely need some eye contact with this bird. I also know that if you make much noise to get his attention, he may very well fly off so you have to be prepared, think fast, and be ready for that moment. Listing the techs for the image give us more information to help in the critique.