Looking good Katie I like the pose and soft light Need to leave more room at bottom for virtual legs, tight as presented.
Would also work on the water to increase density Will get a better feel. While making the image remember to move around since slightly different angles will vary the water appearance then you can pick when you get home. btw in these situations is a temptation to use fill flash but if used must be very slight to preserve the warm light !!!
Is this better? added a little canvas, other pp adjustments...too much saturation? Thanks, Alfred, for your help! I'm thinking I should let this one go and move on to something with more promise?