Hi Desmond - Like the HA, the 1/60 th certainly hasnt helped you much here :) The bright specualr highlights in the BG tend to grab all of my attention.
Not sure about all the negative space either :)
Hi Desmond,
I like the capture. A few things need to be addressed...:Dthe perch over powers the little guy, the lens flair is distracting and takes all the attention from your main subject, and the bird is not sharp. I modified your base image to illustrate these points. I blurred the background, eliminating the ghost flares, I then liquefied it , cropped from the top, and from the left of the frame to make the perch smaller in some what of a proportion to the bird. I selective sharpened the eyes and feathers, boosted saturation and contrast and darkened the background just a tad ...see if this presents better to you...:cool:
i like gus's repost but the bird is still a little too dark for this too work.... gus' bg rocks for sure!! i like what you were thinking. i know you got some different perspectives being only at 200mm with 200 more to go!!!