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  1. 11-13-2008, 01:56 PM #1
    Peregrine Craig Nash
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  2. 11-13-2008, 02:21 PM #2
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    Killer pose and I love the foam and spray, With the sharpest focus on the bird's raised left wing, the face could use some selective sharpening. Are you ethically against adding some canvas at the top? It needs it.
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  3. 11-13-2008, 04:34 PM #3
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    Ps I am not ethically against adding canvas but I only have lightroom :-(
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  4. 11-13-2008, 06:46 PM #4
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    Okay, you suckered me in... Added canvas front and above, sharpened face, and lightened a bit. Actually, the whole wing tip was there...
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  5. 11-13-2008, 08:39 PM #5
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    The repost makes this even better. The pose and surf are very cool. I would apply some curves to the parts in the shadow as it looks a bit dark.
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  6. 11-13-2008, 10:12 PM #6
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    Artie's work on the repost puts this over the top for me. Also agree with Axel on lightening some parts...it looks a tad muddy in spots. Great image, particularly showing off the dark 'armpits'!!
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