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    This is a visitor of my back garden feeders. Comments and critiques will be welcome.
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    Cute little fella, and I like the curious pose. The orange spot above the head is quite distracting, and I would tone down the perch. Another round of USM on and around the eye would be good. Keep them coming Tomas! :-)

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    Cute pose. Daniel has covered all the issues well. More DOF would be nice but it looks like you were battling for light.
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    Tomas I like the pose of this little fellow. In addition to Dan's comments I might be tempted to crop some of the top of the frame. There seems a lot of unused space above the bird.

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    Thank you for your comments and help.
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    Moving the orange spot rather than eliminating it was a nice touch by Artie...good thinking!

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    Cute pose and pretty bird. I agree with Daniel's suggestions but also like Artie's crop idea.

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