Not sure if this works or not, but I coudn't resist capturing a few image of this Mallard in long grass. I know the grass in front of the bill and the light spots in the BG are distracting, but I still like this image.
400D, 100-400 at 400
1/320, f/5.6, ISO 200
Cropped from horizontal
I love your intentions with the shot Aidan it has a very nice feel to it as well as a nice comp. The blade of grass going through the bill is kind of a distraction.But I'm with you I like the shot....