The focus is on the wrong spot, on the body instead of the head that is now out of focus... I like the pose but would prefer the picture in a lieing format with the tail not being cut.
I have one more of the same animal. I liked the pose in #1 (it's on my list of things to shoot... now it's back on my list of things to shoot :D ) but perhaps this is the stronger image?
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