Hi, worked on the things you suggested. hard to decide when to stop the paper plant smoke over the farm. Don't want it to look as if it's taking over. Any more suggestions? Appreciate all comments.
I really like your changes, Hazel! The sharpness is much better and it looks like you may have tweaked the tones/contrast from the last time. I think it's really a great collage now!
This is so neat!! I like the 2 gates together, and the road continuation. Only thing that bothers me is the heavy duty wire at the top from the right side. I think even just covering the black box on it would be more convincing...or at least less prominent. Or maybe a bit of smoke over part of it. And...looks like you cloned something in the smoke that is a bit obvious- a shadow, is it? Might want to white that out...
Sounds like a lot of criticism, but really, I DO like this :) -it's very clever and unique. Just nit-picking...;)
Thanks. I look forward to all critiques. I'll work on what you suggest and see how the thinner wire looks. Part of having the wires is to speak to the reality of the plant--energy, wires, cars, etc. But perhaps a thinner version than the one that is in the photo might work well. I'll recheck the clouds. Thanks. sometimes an extra eye is just what's needed.
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