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    Nikon D70s 70-200VR @200 1/800 f/11 ISO250 -1.0 EV shutter priority

    This was taken a couple weeks ago. Almost no crop; very little adjusting done; sharpened quite a bit. I'd particularly like to know if you think the whites are fairly well defined and if it is sharp enough. And, of course, all other comments welcomed . . .

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    Hi Wendell I like the wing positions and how they are going at each other, seeing the trailing wake and more room up front would have been great. This much action needs space.

    Looks like you cold straighten the frame up a bit and go slightly tighter at the bottom to avoid the partial head reflection. Don't hesitate to bump the ISO a bit if you need to !!!

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    Hi Alfred . . . I did crop some from the right, so I can add that back, but the left side is posted as photographed (not cropped). And, of course, I can crop some off the bottom. Thanks, I'll give those changes a try . . .

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    Hi Wendell,
    I like the capture and the action. Very good advice given by Mr. Forns. I would watch the sun angle before squeezing the shutter, this will avoid the shadow cast on the neck area. My personal taste, I would lighten up the water just a tad..good show, keep them coming...:):cool:

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    I like Al's suggestion of straightening it a bit. Good capture Wendell.

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