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    More fall color in the high country.
    Canon 40D lens 17-40mm f4 set at 28mm f/11, 1/125 bias+ 1.33, ISO 400

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    Hi Bill, I like this very much- If it were my photo I would probably bring the gate to the right of frame a little and exclude the pine tree- your eye would focus more on the aspens- but I like the overall scene. Great job

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    I agree with moving the gate a little to the right Denise, but how would you go about removing the pine? I can think of only a few techniques all pretty difficult. Help me out with what you had in mind.
    Thank you for you suggestions and taking a look.
    Bill

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    By moving the crop over it would take most(not all) of the pine out. The pine isn't ugly and doesn't need to be removed completely- it's just taking your eye from the gate and the aspens. That's only my opinion I'm sure you will get many more qualified opinions than mine!

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    I really like your image!! can you go back and take it again with lower light to deepen the colors?

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    I afraid the colors would be gone by now.

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    Great suggestions guys !!!

    Amy you can use selective color and change the black and neutral channel Also increasing contrast a little will have an effect. The image is lovely as presented and has a great feel !!!

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    Hi Bill,
    I like your composition as presented. Love the colors and the scenery...:cool:

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    Is this what you had in mind, Dennise? I like your suggestion as it fits closer into rule of thirds :)

    Uncle Gus

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    I agree. l like the placement of the gate better in the repost. Sorry to take so long to respond been away for a week. Thank you all for your comments-keeps me thinking when I look through the viewfinder.
    Bill

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    Looks real good. Gus knew exactly what I meant!

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