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    Default Ringed Teal Feathers

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    This is a close-up of the breast feathers of a Ringed Teal.

    OK I am way out of my comfort zone here but I am trying to explore different images other the typical bird images. So when I saw the patterns of this bird I thought I wouls have a go at creating something different (for me).

    This image was processed in ACR. No crop. In CS3 I ran the Poster Edges artistic filter to get this look.

    Does this work for anyone?

    Thanks for looking and of course any critiques.

    Regards,

    Phil

    Camera: XTi
    Lens: Canon EF70-200mm f/2.8 IS USM
    Exposure: 1/250s at f/5.0
    Exposure Compensation: 0
    Exposure Program: Aperture priority
    ISO: 400
    Flash: did not fire
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    Phil: really nice colors and I like the artistic filter. I am looking closely and see even green shades on the feathers. IMHO, if you cleaned up (cloned or cropped) the dark circles that are cut in half, it would make for a stronger image. Godd eye to caatch this.

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    Hi Joanna, Thanks much for the comments. I like your suggestion on the black spots on the feathers. Is this what you had in mind?.

    Thanks again.

    Phil
    Last edited by Phil Ertel; 10-22-2008 at 07:25 PM.

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    Phil, Yes, I think that is a much more clean image. I find that my eye stays in the frame. Well done!

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    Phil, I like your feel on this one. I like the texture and it seems to move a little when you look at it. Very Interesting!!

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    Julie Kenward
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    Good stuff, Phil! I like the repost even better. Good detail throughout and nice overall pattern!

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    Gus Cobos
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    Hi Phil,
    The repost puts it over the top...congrats...well done...:cool:

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    Fabs Forns
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    I love getting out of my comfort zone. I feel it makes me grow as a photographer.
    Great looking study, repost, with ore contrast, is very appealing.

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    Alfred Forns
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    Re post does look better Do keep an eye on the values for the dark areas Its all about local contrast !!!

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