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    Taken at Sunnyvale Baylands this afternoon...

    Canon 40D, Sigma 50-500mm F4-6.3 APO DG HSM, hand held
    ISO 400, 1/640 sec, 500mm at f9, exp comp. +.5

    Your comments and feedback would be appreciated.

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    Compositionally I would give more room above...should be easy with a plain blue sky! There is distracting blue halo around the perimeter of the primaries...was this a very pale sky with the blues pushed in post-processing? Good view of the underwing.

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    Daniel has got some good comments there. I think some more PS work can improve this.

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    Daniel, Vincent, thanks for the feedback. Edge sharpening on the raw with final USM made this halo. Here is the updated version.
    Last edited by Indranil Sircar; 10-20-2008 at 05:06 PM.

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    The repost looks much better. The BG looks a tad bit noisy though.

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    Looks much better now. The added canvas above also helps, and also the more visible catchlight :-)

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