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    Hi all,
    Here's a shot of a Bohemian Waxwing from last winter taken in northern Wisconsin. comments appreciated.


    Rebel XTi
    Canon 500mm IS + 1.4 ex
    ISO 200
    1/200 sec at f6.3
    Exposure + 1/3

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    A lovely comp I like the position of the bird in the frame also maybe a touch more sharpening could be added. Well Done!

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    Beautiful bird on a beautiful perch. The OOF berries near the head are distracting. I find the saturation, especially the reds, a little much. Hope some of these guys come over this way this winter again!

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    Very cool pose and colors. This image can use some extra sharpening. The reds looks fine to me.

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    Terrific BG and fantastic light. I like a lot the bird pose and the composition and I only suggest to clone out the berries near the head (I agree with daniel) and another round of USM to the bird would improve the image for web presentaion.

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    I like the pose and perch and agree on more sharpening of the bird.

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    I had to take another look...and I still think the reds are too much. Here I've lightened the image and reduced the red saturation by 20 points. It now looks more like what I am used to with these guys. The face was especially too strong, and the berries too "bright-red". It's pretty subjective of course, and if I'm wrong let me have it!!:)

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    Great pose and I especially like the eye highlight. The berries are so pretty, and I actually like the oof berries near the head as a repeating element. I agree that the original post looks oversaturated, but I think about the middle of the two posts would be just right. Nice capture.

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