Similar shot to the one I posted a couple of days ago showing Othello the African Fish Eagle "fishing" at the Hawk Conservancy Trust here in the UK.
This was shot with my more usual 500mm lens as I was trying to get tight on the birds face with a large splash of water behind. I quite like the view along his L-H wing and the out of focus water behind him, and was fortunate to get focus on the eye, as with the 500mm you have very little depth of field when shooting close to wide open.
Good details and exposure. I also have concern about the crop. I prefer to see the bird flying straight towards you with the big splash of water covering the entire background. Personally I also prefer to see both wings intact, too, especially from a perspective as presented. But, understandably you had certain situations that you had to deal with when you took this shot.
I think most agree the problem is with the cropping. You have the subjects head very close to the left side of the frame where it is in the process of leaving the frame. It's a good point compositionally to try and leave room in front of your subject to give it a place to go.