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    Hey everyone,

    I'd be interested in hearing your take on this image. I had to do quite a bit or work- added a fair bit of canvas to the left and cloned out several gulls in the lower part of the frame. I do like the result but I'd appreciate C and C on this one. I'll try to post something red next!!!

    30D 300mm L
    f 5.0 1/1250 sec. +1/3 ev
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    Dave Brown

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    Hi Dave,
    The gull looks great in this image. I'm only on my laptop at the moment, but it looks as if you did a good job with your post-processing. My only suggestion would be to lose the dark gray stripe at the top which is distracting. Otherwise, good job!
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    Nicki

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    Hi Dave:

    Great capture . . . No nits!

    Thanks for sharing

    Uncle Gus :D

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    Aren't gulls fun! Great pose and eye contact, really like it.

    Not real fond of the darker band across the top

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    Any improvement? Uncle Gus

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    Excellent Dave and one worth working on !!!!

    Love the pose, exp and sharpness. Get a Big Time Congrats on this one !!!!

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    Like Gus's repost. Great colour and details.

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    Hey,

    Thanks to all for your comments. I think I share your feelings on the strip at the top. I like your repost Gus!

    Dave

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    Hi: What do you think about this painting? Uncle Gus :D

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    I like it !!!!!!!!! At first I thought it was rain :) That bird has character !!!

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    Dave I love the shot! Great feet hanging!!!

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    fantastic almost angelic feeling to it!! i like gus' repost with the dark strip gone. nice work!!!

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    Congratulations Dave,
    I like the composition, and capture, flight angle. You have razor sharp details and good color rendition...I like Uncle Gus' repost eliminating the dark band on top...:cool:

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