The pose is great as it is exposire, very nice colours and sharpness, on the other hand the light seems a bit harsh and getting lower woul've helped. Congratulations!
Nice timing and I like the action you captured in this image. Lovely detail and as already mentioned a slightly lower angle would be good. Many thanks for sharing Mike.
Lovely pose you captured here......but please try a lower shooting angle next time...Photographing from a low angle would make this way more spectacular and intimate.