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    Default Motif: Fall Color Camouflage

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    Canon 40D
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    1/400"
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    spot metering

    I got this photo last January, soon after getting my camera, while visiting my brother in FL. This is a wild Great Horn Owl which had been spending time in the trees at a raptor rehabilitation center. The workers guessed it was a female checking out the male they had in recuperation. I find the dark clump of what appears to be leaves behind the owl to be distracting. And this is a major crop, considering the only lens I had went up to 135mm. lol

    what do you think?

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    Oscar Zangroniz
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    Very nice composition Cheryl. You have excellent details on the owl, I would just try to lighten the owl a little.
    Congrats

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    Cheryl , Your description is perfect- she really does look like she's wearing camo! I think you did a great job photographing her.

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    agree with OZ. would try to lighten the owl a little. i'd also loosen the crop. showing more habitat here wont hurt it at all. beautiful colors. love the owls!!

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    I lightened and cropped less. What do you think? Because of all the details in the foliage in this image, I had to reduce the quality to 50%.

    What do you think??

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    that's definitely colorful!!! and it takes the emphasis away from that blob beside the owl. personally, i'd go for something between the two as far as the crop.

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    Hi Cheryl,
    I like the original composition, but a little lighter...good show...:cool:

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    Alfred Forns
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    Cheryl with that gorgeous bg I wold have place the bird in one of the corners and fired away with the available focal length !!! Sweet !!!

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