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    Default Venetian Bullseye

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    Thanks Fab for giving me the idea for the name of this style. I think it fits. I took a de-saturated photo and cropped it oddly , then making sure not to put the eye in the middle(thanks Julie) I did a liquid effect on it.

    Please feel free to critique honestly. I'm here to learn and I value all of your opinions -good and bad !Thankyou

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    Hi Denise,
    It looks like you are having a lot of fun with this. On my monitor...........it looks like your other posts have more contrast i the greys which would add more depth to the image overall.

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    Roman, Thanks I forgot to sharpen the image after the effect. Is that better?

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Yep...........that did it! Definitely brought out the tones!

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    Lady Denise,
    I like it, the second repost is right on the money...:cool:

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    Denise,
    You seem to be well on your way to establishing a distinctive personal style with your recent posts here. Another well done creation. I think the effect is especially appropriate on the bull and your previous horse post -- looks like exaggerated curly hair in the "animal" context.
    Chris

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    Another winner, Denise! My one comment here is that you have a lot of detail at the top and bottom in the form of varying shades of gray - but the middle leaves me wanting something more. The repost is much better because it splits the image down the middle with two distinctly different gray tones and that really makes a huge difference. Now my eye flows from the top down the center to the bottom swirls. Nicely done!

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    Thanks Julie. I had forgotten to sharpen it on the first post. Any suggestions on the middle?

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    Denise: I like several of your previous posts better. I am having trouble with the composition. IMHO, if you rotate 90 degrees CW, it would interest me more. It would look like a landscape with a bird on the left? Just a suggestion.

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    Good eye Roman It did make a difference !!! Would look big time good hanging on a gallery !!!!

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