taking off

[sten-åke nilsson]

critiques and comments...please. my new prime lens arrived,and I could hardly wait to take it out and do some test shooting :)

[Axel Hildebrandt]

Welcome to BPN, Sten! I like the setting and takeoff poses. I wish there were no overlap between the wings and it could go a bit brighter for my taste. I would also sharpen the birds a tad more. Please post the techs. Keep them coming!

[Linda Robbins]

Welcome to BPN! Enjoy your new lens, and thank you for posting! Nice takeoff poses and good framing. Agree with Axel that the image needs to be brighter and the birds should be sharpened. Looking forward to seeing more of your images!

[sten-åke nilsson]

hello Axel, thanks for your comment, and for the advise =) regards sten

[sten-åke nilsson]

and linda.

[Magnus Thornberg]

Nice composition with a great low angle! You have placed the birds nice in the frame! i agree with Linda about the sharpening and brightness!

/Magnus

[sten-åke nilsson]

hello Magnus,thanks for your comments and advise.I`ll take it with me =) regards sten