Beautiful family capture Stuart and I love the story this image tells. I do find the saturation a bit strong but love that you were ale to capture eye contact with the whole family. Great timing and many thanks for sharing.
I agree the saturation is strong, and I would prefer a warmer WB.Compositionally this could use more room in front of the cranes for them to walk into. First tee-off, or 18th green? (May have to be moved to HOM forum?...)
There is something terribly wrong with the colors on this one Stuart. I would try to warm the colors a little bit in your RAW converter. Love the family "walk"
This could be in my backyard. I live on a golf course, and there are lots of very tame cranes here. It's so much fun to see the babies with the parents and watch them feeding. I go through 250 pounds of cracked corn a month...
You have captured a sweet family moment, and there is enough seperation between all the birds. The oversaturation has been mentioned.