I shot this as I was leaving Plum Island last week as it was getting dark. After driving 5 miles from the southern beach area, there is a salt pannes area. Like much of Plum Island the light is better for early morning shooting.
1/1600 sec Nikon D300, 400 VR f/10 auto iso.
Any critique is fine, but I am wondering about composition and leaving the markings of the water behind the birds rather than making it a solid gold.
I wouldn't make it a solid gold, just eliminate the streaks (but leave the mottling at top). I like the composition, but the birds are oversharpened - leaving a noticeable halo around their perimeter.
Love the composition and colors. I also like the birds looking at the same direction. I have to disagree with Daniel on this one. streaks are part of the habitat to me but we all have different taste. However, I agree about the over-sharpened.