I like your framing, and the pose of the baby is good. I wish the adult had given you a better head angle. A little fill flash with this light angle would have opened up the shadows on the birds. A sweet scene!
Yes, nice framing and sharp, but by initially choosing a poor light angle you set your self up in a difficult situation. The broken off reeds in the BKGR are distracting in part because they are well lit...
Suggestion: unless you are going for a silhouette or a strongly backlit image, point your shadow at the subject...
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