This is OK, Mike. I think the composition is OK, hap ok, and the colors are ok.Still, there's one thing that you may still want to do something about it: noise. I think some of the pp marks are showing, too.
Lots of good thing here a Desmond pointed out, fully agree with him. Not sure how much of a crop it is? When its sever remember how any little thing is magnified !!!
This looks to be a huge crop. There is a lot of noise and fuzziness to the whole image. It also appears that there are some remainders of careless cloning.
thanks to all of you, i am doing my very best and havae a lot of photos that i want to put up. if you think i would do better at the beginers paage i will gladly go back. the new ones are better than this picture and i'll try not to experiment .