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Thread: Walking the Swamp II

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    Paul Marcellini
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    Default Walking the Swamp II

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    Well I took a little more time to compose and took advice from you guys and I think it worked for a stronger image. I can't believe I found the same spot. The light didn't illuminate the submerged vegetation exactly as I wanted but overall I think the image works.

    Thanks for looking,
    Paul

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    Maxis Gamez
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    HI Paul,

    Very interesting composition, textures and light but I think this will be stronger in B&W, not that in color is any less of a great image! Try and let us see it!! :)

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    Johannes Glännman
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    I like how you made the picture clean. Nothing disturbing elements and good comp. I might have tried a bigger aperture to make the dept of field smaller. I think that should make the picture even cleaner...

    Cheers // johannes

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    Robert Amoruso
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    I agree with you Paul, the composition here is superior to the previous image. I like how the 1/3sec exposure created a slight blur to the submerged vegetation. It makes you think when seeing the image - sharp all over and then the blurred submerged vegetation.

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    Paul Marcellini
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    Thanks for the comments guys...here's a b/w, not doing much for me, but you asked. =)

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    Maxis Gamez
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    Hi Paul,

    Boy oh boy.... I said B&W not B&B LOL :) Lots of contrast on this one but what a difference!!

    At this point I have to agree with you. Color is the way of go but it was interesting to see it in B&B as well :)

    Keep up the good work!

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hi Paul,
    Agree that this one is stronger compositionally and really captures the feel of the swamp well. I do like the color version better.............still debating the tips of the bromiliad touching the edges of the frame........but it is still very well done!

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    John T. Watson
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    I like the color best, but after seeing the B&W, I kind of wonder what a Infrared would have looked like. Of course considering the shutter speed you are already working with, you could take a coffee break waiting for the shutter to close on a Infrared/

    John

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