1/2000, F4.0, ISO 200, EF500mm f/4L IS USM, 1 handheld
I could have extended the canvas to the right but chose not to, this was almost full frame and wouldn't you know it I didn't lead him to the right far enough. The light was a tad on the harsh side (08/06/2007 16:447) but with some curve, level adjustments and selective sharpening I am pleased with it. Of course I value and appreciate any constructive criticism you have to offer.
Very nice capture, Darren. Since the blue sky is solid, it wouldn't be too much trouble extending the canvas, but alas, you have the last word :) If you do not wan t do that, perhaps[s cropping from bottom and top would give it a more balance ratio. Good on the workflow, excellent exposure and good detail in the feathers.
As far as the pose, I wish the wings were fully extended, versus the "clothes hanger" pose and that the head did not merge with the wing.
Hi Darren,
Another vote for more canvas on the right to balance the proportions. I actually really like the wing position as shown - it is unusual and the feather detail is lovely.
Regards,
Nicki
Lovely pose. Although it is not the classic flight pose, I like it a lot. You did a good job with PP work. -t he light does not look very harsh in the image. Nice sharp detail . Since the image is square as presented, did you crop from the left side? I must say that I think adding some canvas to the right would give the hawk more room to fly into, but that is a personal decision. Nice capture..
The second post with the change to 4:3 is improved and the head shoulder separation has already been mentioned. A good job, sharp and nice eye catchlight.
Swainson's Hawk
7) but with some curve, level adjustments and selective sharpening I am pleased with it. Of course I value and appreciate any constructive criticism you have to offer.
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