Results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: macro wanna-be image

  1. #1
    BPN Viewer Cheryl Flory's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    S.E. Michigan
    Posts
    1,480
    Threads
    218
    Thank You Posts

    Default macro wanna-be image

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Canon 40D
    Canon 28 - 135 lens
    1/250
    F6.3
    ISO 400
    exposure +.33

    This is another image using a non-macro lens at its closest range. In the original image, the plant stem was nearly completely vertical. But just looking at at the image made me tired, wondering how long this little butterfly could hang on by its toes at such a steep angle, so I rotated the image to make it easier for it. lol

    I wanted the focus on the head and wings, but if I had used F8 then I could have gotten the legs in sharper also.

    Would love to hear your critiques!

  2. #2
    BPN Viewer Cheryl Flory's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    S.E. Michigan
    Posts
    1,480
    Threads
    218
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    oh, did typical PS adjustment but desaturated the flower blossoms quite a bit since they were overpowering the brown butterfly.

  3. #3
    Gus Cobos
    Guest

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Hi Cheryl,
    I like what you were trying to do here. The background with the multiple out of focus flowers seems a bit busy; this takes away from your main subject. I think that this capture would have worked better as a vertical instead of horizontal. I made slight modifications to your image to give you an idea of where you should go with this. My illustration is not finished; its just a draft for you to complete as a homework assignment. I changed the background to a solid color using the traces of green in the original by cloning out the oof flowers; gave you selective sharpening on the butterfly, and kicked up the contrast and saturation just a notch. Also lightened the background. Like I said; I want you to re-work your image and repost it when finished...:cool:

  4. #4
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Boynton Beach, Florida
    Posts
    7,726
    Threads
    640
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    here's a different take. i just used a color control point in Capture NX to change the color of the lighter areas to a comparable color. ran some NR on the bg and voila!! btw, the color control point is the same thing as the viveza plug in for PS.

    i dont think it's wannabe macro. i think you did pretty dang good!! your subject is tack sharp. the bg is just a little busy. nice job!!

  5. #5
    Alfred Forns
    Guest

    Default

    Great re posts I was thinking on doing what Harold did to start since the light color was the killer Might clone some of the purple behind the head for a clearer look.

    Gus took it over the top with the drastic clean up Will take some doing to clean all around the bug ...... my preference ..... follow the bug till I get the desired bg!!!!!

  6. #6
    Sid Overbey
    Guest

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Cheryl, I like your shot quite a lot. Very nice and sharp. The BG doesn't bother me but I used LR2 to tone it down a bit with the Vignette tool and some gradient adjustment. I think it makes the moth stand out more.

    Sid

  7. #7
    Nonda Surratt
    Guest

    Default

    Good one Cheryl. Like the reposts, right fond of Sid's

  8. #8
    BPN Viewer Cheryl Flory's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    S.E. Michigan
    Posts
    1,480
    Threads
    218
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Thank you, everyone! love the suggestions! Always something new to be keeping in mind when going after good images.
    Thanks

  9. #9
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    8,458
    Threads
    682
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nice sharp capture. I like the simple background to really isolate your subject. The green is really pretty to set the moth off. Nice earth tones.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics