Results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: pectoral pose

  1. #1
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Hadley, Massachusetts
    Posts
    623
    Threads
    95
    Thank You Posts

    Default pectoral pose

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    juvie pectoral sandpiper, Weskeag salt marsh, South Thomaston, Maine. These southbound juveniles arrive in early September, stick around for two or three weeks.

    1DM3, 500m 1.4X, ISO800, f/5.6, 1/1600. Added a little canvas to right.

    Comments appreciated.

  2. #2
    Judy Lynn Malloch
    Guest

    Default

    Gorgeous image with lovely composition and excellent detail. The only thing I would like to see is a tad more canvas at the bottom. Like this alot and many thanks for sharing Keith.

  3. #3
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Cheltenham, Glos UK
    Posts
    2,754
    Threads
    206
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Hi Keith,
    Beautiful feather detail and perch. I also love the minimal look of this. Do find the side lighting a bit distracting as it throws the bird's face in to shadow.
    Regards,
    Nicki

  4. #4
    Lifetime Member Doug Brown's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Albuquerque, NM
    Posts
    11,879
    Threads
    917
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Hi Keith. I like the pose here! I would lighten the bird a bit and probably do a little more sharpening also. Thanks for posting!
    Upcoming Workshops: Bosque del Apache 2019, Ecuador 2020 (details coming soon)
    Website -
    Facebook - 500px

  5. #5
    Alfred Forns
    Guest

    Default

    Agree with Nicki on the light. Full front lighting would have enhanced the feather look As presented would brighten the image with curves adjustment. I like the pose and setting !!

  6. #6
    Super Moderator Daniel Cadieux's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Ottawa, Canada
    Posts
    26,266
    Threads
    3,976
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    This is a situation where flash would have helped alot with the shadows as you didn't have the best light angle. Agree with Judy Lynn for more room at bottom. Overall quite nice!

  7. #7
    Linda Robbins
    Guest

    Default

    I really like the clean look to the image and the beautiful subject, but the light angle is a detriment. Fill flash would have been good here. You could try lightening the bird only and sharpening the bird a little more. Agree that a little more room on the bottom woulf have been good because the perch is nice.

  8. #8
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Hadley, Massachusetts
    Posts
    623
    Threads
    95
    Thank You Posts

    Default repost pectoral pose

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Thanks for all the suggestions. Can't add more canvas to the bottom, but did work on the bird per suggestions. Lightened and sharpened the bird (USM 125 / 2.0 / 0) three times. Not much I can do about the lighting angle, but I hope this looks better. Seems to be better to me. Can't tell you how much I value these critiques - they really help!

  9. #9
    Forum Participant Manos Papadomanolakis's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Crete Greece
    Posts
    3,408
    Threads
    179
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I Iike the soft/warm light and composition!

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics