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    One from a while back, taken in Cedar Key, FL, at sunrise, looking out over the flats and oyster bars. Normally I wouldn't dead center the sun, but I thought it worked in this particular scene. Let me know what you think.

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    Man some sweet light light here Jason.. Your really going after the panos.. I need to do more of them. Great image but I see two thing I may have done differently (doesn't mean better) I might have liked the sun a bit to the left to a power point (Does the golden mean apply to pano's?) and I'm nost sure I like the FG island on the left. Love the little island on the right.. May have used it as my anchor..

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    Hey Jason,

    I have to agree with Robert's comment. I don't mind the sun but the FG island is really bothering me. With that said, the colors and details are fantastic.

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    I agree with Maxis and Robert--the FG island doesn't seem to contribute to the image. It was a good idea to try it, though. As for the sun, I wouldn't have any problems with it if the FG was stronger.

    As it is, I would suggest a crop from the bottom and left side to eliminate the FG. At the same time, it would shift the sun slightly. I've uploaded an illustration of what I'm thinking.

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    Alfred Forns
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    Agree with the crop suggestion !!!!! Sweet !!!

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    That's how I would crop as well. Center placement of the sun did not work for me as did the left cropped island.

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